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My heart was burned, my chest filled with smoke, my body became coal. Each breath I took fanned the flame. Reduced to embers- but the rhythm to your lyrics remained strong. The beat goes on. |
Its about this guy I broke up with about a year ago. He was a musician and I had my itunes on shuffle and a song he wrote came on and all the pain just came rushing back. | Posted on 2008-11-24 00:00:00 | by Roula | [ Reply to This ] | I like it, but there is more than one interpretation that can be taken away. On first reading, I took it as physical love passion. But it could have other meanings such as rapture for a song's lyrics. I don't think it is necessary for a poem to have only one meaning to all. The length of a poem doesn't matter. What matters is if it gets to the reader/listener. This does. | | Posted on 2008-11-23 00:00:00 | by my shadow | [ Reply to This ] | Em, I'm not altogether sure what this is about to be totally honest so I'm not gonna rate it. | It is extremely short but that's not necessarily bad I just don't get the message. All I can say is it should be "the rhythm OF your lyrics" | Posted on 2008-11-23 00:00:00 | by ChildInTime | [ Reply to This ] | Kinda short but I like it but what is it you are trying to accomplish? | | Posted on 2008-11-23 00:00:00 | by Doublefeather | [ Reply to This ] | |