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    dots Submission Name: dont give indots
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    Author: brokenbylove
    ASL Info:    26/m/australia
    Elite Ratio:    1.27 - 63/298/259
    Words: 95
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsdont give indots
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    why bother, why try
    when it all goes to smash
    you feel like your going to crash
    struggle on or fall
    its so easy to let go
    just lose control
    let your mind loose
    forget everything you lost
    never give up, thats what they say
    but sometimes its all you can do to keep your pain at bay
    never surrender and you will never lose
    only the weak fail
    be strong and carry on
    in the end you will say i win
    i did not give in
    you have thrown you fears to the wind




    Submitted on 2008-11-23 06:35:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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