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    dots Submission Name: glowingdots
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    Author: Beulah
    Elite Ratio:    4.78 - 588/414/44
    Words: 19
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    Description:
       rediscovering new realms and facets of life...


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    dotsglowingdots
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    this distant
    plane of
    abstract thought
    brings sudden
    rememberance and
    misplaced hesitation
    to imagery
    undiscovered
    yet
    intimately
    known




    Submitted on 2008-11-24 04:41:57     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      The plane of abstract thought holds memories of long ago, that now comes forward in sudden flashes that should have been lived with and not been hidden because of imagined uncertainty. that still remains intimately alive.. Luv u Dad
    | Posted on 2008-12-13 00:00:00 | by Joachim | [ Reply to This ]
      Hi liefkind. Ek het jou stuk op Word gesit om te ontleed maar min tyd gekry want die donkey internet williweki.
    Ek dink dis baie abstrak denke en ek self sukkel effe om by te kom. Maar ek lees wel iets daarin wat sal cklick. Ek dink dit het ook met Rune stone Isa te doen dis 23. Kry ES oop maar nie epos vir die dag nie. Dankie vir die inloer sal weer kyk. Luv u Dad.
    Terloops, kan jy kyk of jy rubymoon kan cklick. Effe moeilik Sy skryf fantastiese boek sienek,my styl nogal. Luv u Dad
    | Posted on 2008-11-27 00:00:00 | by Joachim | [ Reply to This ]


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