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Two animals go for a walk Outside. One a beast, One Me. Me, I peruse around The dry leaves and the cold Wandering, Wondering, Dreaming, Despairing. --I hear a rustle And turn to see Two opaque onyx orbs facing Me, With a surrounding head Slightly a-tilt. "Go potty Angel;" Her white coat the only allowance For such a name. I return to my depths; A bottomless question with only walls To know. A Blank knowing a blank, Standing amidst trees with bark That is the gray skin of An enveloping lid, Closed; They sway, As if old men rocking asleep, Dreaming of the good ol' times. I look beyond their tops To a smothered sky Of gray quilt clouds. I simply feel like a pit, A crater Born and constantly tortured by The knowledge of Greater. The business done, I move my walls Back within The walls, and continue. |
This made me feel interested to know what you were thinking about when you wrote this. Its an unusual peice and makes me interested in it. I was a little confused in some parts hopefully you could explain. Two opaque onyx orbs facing Me, With a surrounding head Slightly a-tilt. "Go potty Angel;" Her white coat the only allowance For such a name. Not sure what you could do to improve it cause a writters peice is a touchy peice of work and has special meaning to the other. Thanks for the complement. -J | Posted on 2010-05-12 00:00:00 | by cyberpoet | [ Reply to This ] | A riddle? | | Posted on 2008-11-30 00:00:00 | by Raphael | [ Reply to This ] | |