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anime reality bits back part 2 of the camping trip

Author: truefruit06
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anime reality bits back part 2 of the camping trip

they sprint
(personal interview Kagome)
Kagome: ok we have a pretty good chance were going to win, except me and lights starvation and, tai and ash have the map, and... oh god.
they get back to camp.
and the winners are.... the .... earth team.
Earth team: (cheers and whoops)
hinata, tai, and ash stare at light and kagome and it said
'you are so friecking lucky.
Me: and... you get to enjoy this food! a turkey! mashed potatos and stuffing, since you couldn't enjoy thanksgiving with your family. Bonus.
the rest of you pack up
(personal interview Dawn)
Dawn: i don't know how we lost, and i like everyone on the team. how will i make it through this.
(that evening)
Me: welcome everyone. ready to find out and whoever loses must leave the island forever. first vote, dawn.
second vote, L
third vote, sora
forth vote L
fifth and final vot goes to
L: you back-stabbing dirty slimy rotten basterds!
he uns away
Me: wow, what a baby.
tune in next time for the next Reality bites back.

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