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    dots Submission Name: Puppet (Ft. The Still Silence)dots
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    Author: AeThe Lost Poet
    ASL Info:    19/M/DE
    Elite Ratio:    3.6 - 147/184/122
    Words: 210
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 993
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    Description:
       Me and TSS do it again-- and well this is probably our best yet... and this is probably me best first verse posted to date...... i would like to put it on the MIC.... TSS.... she's easy to get along with that's y we have so many together... and she's willing to step out of her zone.. and she makes it work...


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    dotsPuppet (Ft. The Still Silence)dots
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    (Me: AeThe Lost Poet)
    He decides to set aside,
    his own proposition
    thinking "why?"—
    she'd rather opt to miss him,
    there's no optimism—nope—
    just a heartbeat
    thump, thump his heart jumps,
    asking "are WE?"
    "We? Yes, we..." exactly,
    what you think it is
    He lists reasons why this season,
    He should get a kiss,
    Bliss escape him, yup,
    Love makes him a puppet,
    His mouth stumbles yet again,
    Use his foot to stuff it...

    and never shall the strings
    be removed--
    yes, his heart's bound up,
    and it brings reproof,
    and never shall this boy,
    be the same
    when his heart is strung up
    it brings him pain

    (The Still Silence)
    Unlike the last times,
    She feels it's true.
    The laughter of his eyes,
    Brings back a new
    Sense of herself
    She had thought was gone;
    And it's love
    She can feel it,
    And it doesn't feel wrong.

    (If the strings cut deep
    The heart will bleed.
    To what extent does the pain
    Outweigh the need?)


    Her wings are clipped;
    But she doesn't oppose-
    And her heart is strung;
    But she doesn't repose-
    A caged bird in ashes:
    Her soot heart sings.
    The puppet breaks

    From and by the strings.




    Submitted on 2008-11-24 22:18:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Holy *^&$. No seriously utterly captivating. I don't think I have read a poem with so much emtion and yet with so much clarity. God that first verse is so familar, and that second verse is well written and conclusive. You two are amazing together.

    *SilverD*
    | Posted on 2008-12-01 00:00:00 | by Silver20G | [ Reply to This ]
      Fantastic job. I am speechless...
    Keep up the great work, and I'll keep reading

    »Haely«
    | Posted on 2008-11-26 00:00:00 | by MinervaBlu | [ Reply to This ]


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