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Nothing New


Author: fightingirl19
ASL Info:    17/F/MN
Elite Ratio:    4.92 - 148 /126 /50
Words: 77
Class/Type: Misc /Venting
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Nothing New


our beautiful babies,
our little loves,

they are grown,
they are stewed,
they are eaten.

their minds,
and their bodies,
then their souls.

chewed up,
regurgitated,
spit out

left for dead,
killed,
destroyed.

the world,
the world,
she does this

to our children,
to our children,
but

it's
nothing new.
nothing new.

because we knew,
and there was nothing,
nothing,

we could do.
it was nothing new.




Submitted on 2008-11-26 04:55:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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