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Once!


Author: Blackphoenix14
ASL Info:    17/male/AR
Elite Ratio:    1.78 - 26 /87 /67
Words: 84
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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Once!



Once in every lifetime, someone comes along,
The one special heart
You've been waiting for your whole life long.

Once in every lifetime, God sends an angel from above,
To make your life complete
Who you can give you endless love.

When a love like this comes, make any sacrifice,
For the best things in life
Seldon come along twice.

There is no love that compares to yours and mine,
A love from heaven that only comes
"Once In Every Lifetime."




Submitted on 2008-11-27 02:39:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I tell you what young Fella; I have read bucket loads of poetry and verse in my time!
Every now and then you come accross a writer who is natrally talented.

You are One who posesses such talent... Great Wordsmithery.

Thank you for sharing!


Timmy S. Edgar © 2008
| Posted on 2008-11-29 00:00:00 | by Timmy S. Edgar | [ Reply to This ]


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