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    dots Submission Name: Oasisdots
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    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 313
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Oasis

    The cup of kisses
    Poured from lips
    Such savage beauty
    Must fight for breath
    Its grave the body
    Relinquished
    Rides hurricane winds
    Of coiled fascination
    The images of everything

    The tangles of thought
    Are ribbons of the sky
    Cloud born vaults
    Lightening the blindness of souls
    Dancing in the hail of caresses
    With thunder roaring
    Catching smiles
    In the echoís of names

    Speak then
    Of all that is done
    To know this spot lit love
    A performer of movements
    In the ballet of lives

    Imagine where the silence seems
    Full
    Raging to the resonance of a scream
    Thinking of places behind the doors
    Of dreams


    The binding sun of eyes
    Call to the desert
    In a dust storm of years
    The oasis of sex
    Wetting a blessing with tears
    Clutched in the sand held palms
    All is known
    All is shown




    Conceive then to know
    All places been
    To fathom the thought in a phantom
    Is all that it seems
    To stand in a world
    With so much more in
    With never enough of a never ending
    Wandering over the oceans
    Of souls

    Through space there is nothing more clear
    The shinning face of the known
    Between right and wrong
    And all the lies and truths shown

    Itís just a little curious to discover who
    When all the struggle clears away
    Nothing to think of
    Except how to spend a day

    So feast your eyes constantly
    On all the beauty
    No need to fight or remember
    Just free to wander
    Free to be free
    The invisible gate
    The invisible key
    Just walk through
    And be

    ( what will it be like for you
    when I am me
    do you think that you know )









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      This is an oasis of WOW! Nice morning read with the scent of green tea with Christmas carols dancing through my head.

    love,peace,joy,abundance & smiles to share
    tif ~*~
    | Posted on 2008-12-02 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]


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