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    dots Submission Name: In The Event of Faithdots
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    Author: erinmaia
    Elite Ratio:    0.19 - 0/2/2
    Words: 94
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    Description:
       just some poem i made 2 years ago for a guy who never really gave me a second glance...


    the worst feeling isn't being lonely... it's knowing you'll never be remembered by the person you'll never forget...


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    dotsIn The Event of Faithdots
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    One time, one place was all it took
    my life has closed just like a book
    the mem'ry of hurt lingers on
    the taste of bitterness and scorn

    the silent tears that I once shed
    have all but dried and left me dead
    and so, now numb, I shout in vain
    this voiceless cry drives me insane

    and now, the wound that carved this heart
    left me this scar, tore me apart
    but still I say without regret
    I love you, you worthless piece of s**t...


    if you only knew....




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      wow. this is great. I mean sad, but good work. it flows nicely, and the language and change of moods from saddness to anger caught me off gaurd. I wonder if that was intentional?
    | Posted on 2008-11-29 00:00:00 | by Jessica Lynn | [ Reply to This ]

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
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