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    dots Submission Name: meaninglessdots
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    Author: StainedxBlades
    ASL Info:    19/f/ Mass
    Elite Ratio:    1.76 - 8/13/24
    Words: 113
    Class/Type: Deep Thought/I am dead inside
    Total Views: 165
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 817



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    dotsmeaninglessdots
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    when you meet me
    you see this face
    so emotional
    tears falling
    eyes wide
    so hurt

    time now has passed
    thoughts are growing clearer
    emotions seem to fade away
    as i can hardly feel pain
    you've been with me so long
    how can you not know
    whats happening
    I think i'm dying
    i, myself, am dying
    on the inside
    i live on
    but feel nothing
    need nothing
    want nothing
    i'm sedated
    but nothing makes it go away

    now you look at me
    you see my face
    so emotionless
    you have nothing
    to say

    i feel nothing now
    not happiness
    not pain
    no tears
    and no laughter
    life is meaningless




    Submitted on 2008-11-28 23:47:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Wow this piece is certainly drenched with emotion and pain of the heart. I truly hope that you have found yourself in a happier place since this was written.

    Great imagery; Well done.


    Timmy S. Edgar © 2008
    | Posted on 2008-11-29 00:00:00 | by Timmy S. Edgar | [ Reply to This ]



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