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Author: SilentDreams42
Elite Ratio:    6.43 - 38 /30 /42
Words: 10
Class/Type: Poetry /
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thought of it last week..
but i dont know why it seems so familiar

i liked it though
and thought it was very relevant to many circumstances


Friends



Friends
nothing more

Expectations
still soar






Submitted on 2008-11-29 07:18:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  this piece is too nice it says everything in a few short lines


gud job cuz.
| Posted on 2008-12-04 00:00:00 | by DaGrimReaperess | [ Reply to This ]


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