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    dots Submission Name: The First Sign of Diminishing Love Is. ....dots
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    Author: col13x
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    dotsThe First Sign of Diminishing Love Is. ....dots
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    The First Sign of Diminishing Love Is. .....

    While all there is
    Is a kiss
    The explosion reeks its havoc in your head
    While all there is
    Is this havoc-ed love you have
    This ripping sheet of unvented desire
    Blows like a tattered flag
    In your chest

    And I have walked on the burning coals of love
    And sucked on the flames of passion
    I have done this only to protect
    The innocence you were defending
    Just waiting for the day to come
    When you finally decide
    To give it up

    So now you are sitting on the fuse
    Of the bomb you made
    Hoping someone will hand you a match
    Set the fire you needed
    Sparking the powdered lust
    To ashes made from the valley green
    You once had
    But now have lost

    There is only one explanation
    Only one moment
    In the scramble of emotion
    But you cannot stop to see
    Not in the state youíre in
    You will not even stop to listen
    To all the same things once again
    Yet while all there is
    Is a kiss
    The storm rages on in your head

    And now your body can no longer stand
    The feelings it keeps within shaking hands
    The echoís of your trembling mind
    And the continuing scream in your chest
    Speaks the spectrum words stuck in your throat
    While choking on all the words you spoke
    On the subject of love

    While all there is
    Is this madness
    While all there is
    Is this empty expression
    Of my love
    You will always be on this other side
    Of me
    Itís the saddest thing Iíve ever known
    To know I no longer contain
    The hunger
    Take it
    Itís yours to have
    Youíve swallowed every ounce of strength
    I once possessed

    So I lost myself in wanting
    So what
    And in trying to be giving
    I have dug for the last drops
    Of understanding

    But when you find yourself alone
    And alone with all the dreariness
    Feeling the need to be taken by the hand
    And pointed at the sun
    And ďnoĒ
    Your love does not contain
    All this rushing insanity
    And all the effort of your memory
    All the reasons and emotions have haphazard themselves
    And in the midst of it all you feel
    You will think itís a better deal
    To let it go

    Let go the dreams
    Let go the skins
    The engine of your head running
    The needle in your skull pushing
    And driving you to its point

    Its just not you anymore

    And the first sign of diminishing love

    Is

    Diminishing sex






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