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To Whom It May Concern

Author: HellBoundAngel
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To Whom It May Concern

To Whom It May Concern,
It's been a while hasn't it? Well, I hope so far that your life has been heaven sent. And I hope that what happened between us, you will soon forget. But that's neither here nor there. Oh yeah! I've been like everywhere. From the beaches of Miami, to the city of Seoul, Korea, and when I made it back to Philly I was hoping that I could see ya. But you had already left for school and you wont be back till June. So I decided to write you a letter; this letter, I hope that it reaches you soon. I ain't gonna lie, I think of you often, and of all of the fun that we had way back when. Back when we were not only lovers, but best friends. Answer me this, what happened back then, huh? What led you to go astray that fateful day? Did my feelings not mean anything to you? Or did you just decide to do whatever the hell you wanted to? Ok, I'm sorry. I promised myself that I wouldn't go there. I just wanted you to be more aware of the pain that you had caused me. Oh yeah, I heard on the street about your girl, and about you. Rumor has it that she left your behind for another dude? Damn hun, that's down right cruel. But what goes around comes around, by now I'm sure you know this is true. Ok my hand is cramping and this letter is too damn long. So I'm just gonna end with a good bye. Oh yeah, and if you can, please respond.

With Love,

P.S. I really am sorry hun, I'm sure that you loved her.

Submitted on 2008-11-29 21:04:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  at first i didn't like it, and i am still not crazy about how it is put together. somehow it instills strong emotions in me though. so .....good job for that i guess.
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