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Author: PiperH ASL Info:    17, F, Georgia Elite Ratio:    3.89 - 253 /299 /172 Words: 56

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I let my words spell out anger I let my eyes be deceived I put my heart in danger I didn't want to believe I hid my smile from the world I threw the covers on my face I forgot about that little girl with me, she was replaced

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