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Author: PiperH
ASL Info:    17, F, Georgia
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Words: 56
Class/Type: Misc /Misc
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I let my words spell out anger
I let my eyes be deceived
I put my heart in danger
I didn't want to believe

I hid my smile from the world
I threw the covers on my face
I forgot about that little girl
with me, she was replaced

Submitted on 2008-11-30 00:14:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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