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    dots Submission Name: feeling funkydots
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    Author: nastydevil
    ASL Info:    17/male/sault ste maire
    Elite Ratio:    0.94 - 1/5/13
    Words: 151
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 150
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 898



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    Laying in bed
    with a smile on my face
    thinking she is the one for me
    why else am I feeling this way

    every time I see her smile
    my heart beats a little bit faster
    looking in her eyes
    I melt like butter
    one touch could make me explode

    wanting to be alone with her
    tell her how I really feel
    tell her she is the greatest thing to happen to me
    sell my soul to the devil
    to be with her for one more second

    to hear her say my name once more
    see the smile, look in those eyes
    before my day ends
    puts a smile on my face
    and butterfly's in my stomach

    shaking knee's when I see her
    words stutter, lips wont move
    want to be close
    it would mean the world to me
    to hear her say "I love you"




    Submitted on 2008-12-01 18:23:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I absolutely love this poem I Really felt the heart in this poem, at this moment in time I feel the same way for one girl but I don't know how to tell her. I feel she won't be my friend after I tell her, or she'll really put me down. So I take it though that she knows how you feel about her, I wish I had that kind of courage when it comes to that kind of thing. Well I will restate my self here But the poem really touchs my heart and I definatly on my favs I rate this poem a 5 fo sho'.
    | Posted on 2008-12-04 00:00:00 | by Sepheroth432 | [ Reply to This ]



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