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    dots Submission Name: You did it.dots
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    Author: Charlie Poppins
    ASL Info:    22, female, England
    Elite Ratio:    3.03 - 71/85/65
    Words: 516
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Love
    Total Views: 674
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 3045



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       A long, long time coming.


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    dotsYou did it.dots
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    I'm still listening to rugged voices that cry in sympathy with old steel strings,
    But this time it’s different;
    I'm not remembering old times that flew out on injured wings.
    They left me stinging as long as those voices kept singing...
    This time we're slow dancing in a big gold room,
    Nothing else seems important,
    Perspective has sunk in.
    Everything else at the back of my mind in the dark, just din,
    The only image in my mind is my arms wrapped around,
    You're back so strong,
    Your muscles have protected me for so, so long.

    Ch:
    What was I thinking; not looking at our present?
    How could I forget the gift of a future that you bring to me each day?
    How much will it take for me to realise I'm not hurting anymore, that you took the pain away,
    Baby I think you did it,
    You took me over, whispered my real name and stole me away,
    Baby I think you did it,
    You kissed my inside, cradled my secrets and showed me your way,
    Yeah…Baby I think you did it.

    You took away every curtain;
    Never figured I'd be beautiful behind the veil;
    And yet somehow you're still holding me near, you're still tapping my nose,
    Your crazy love prevails,
    And maybe you'll never see this,
    I don't even think you need to,
    But I'm glad you made me see myself,
    You made me decide who;
    Who I want to be; I want to be with you.

    Ch:
    What was I thinking, not looking at our present?
    How could I forget the gift of a future that you bring to me each day?
    How much will it take for me to realise I'm not hurting anymore, that you took the pain away,
    Baby I think you did it,
    You took me over, whispered my real name and stole me away,
    Baby I think you did it,
    You kissed my inside, cradled my secrets and showed me your way,
    Yeah …Baby I think you did it.

    The intro music might be dying,
    Our pace might get a little slower,
    Just gives me time to relax into you,
    And lay my head on your shoulder.
    I don't need to torment myself anymore,
    Somehow with your reflection in my eyes, life isn't as scary as it was before.
    I'm giving myself to you,
    Not a sacrifice but a privilege;
    Just waiting for the day I'll deserve you.

    Ch:
    What was I thinking, not looking at our present?
    How could I forget the gift of a future that you bring to me each day?
    How much will it take for me to realise I'm not hurting anymore, that you took the pain away,
    Baby I think you did it,
    You took me over, whispered my real name and stole me away,
    Baby I think you did it,
    You kissed my inside, cradled my secrets and showed me your way,
    Yeah...Baby I think you did it.





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    ||| Comments |||
      I like this a lot. I feel a rhythm and can almost hear the words being sung. There are a couple repeat lines that I feel get to the heart of your lyric - "You took me over, whispered my real name and stole me away" and "You kissed my inside, cradled my secrets and showed me your way" These are great lines. Thanks for allowing me to see your work. - Jim
    | Posted on 2008-12-03 00:00:00 | by my shadow | [ Reply to This ]


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