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    dots Submission Name: Goodbye My Love dots
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    Author: Kaygrl
    ASL Info:    26/female/Washington
    Elite Ratio:    2.43 - 162/239/241
    Words: 577
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsGoodbye My Love dots
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    Here I sit looking at the blank page in front of me,
    And yes; this is about you,

    The pain is inside just wanting to come out,
    And the tears find their way down my face,

    But thereís nothing I can do,
    When youíve already moved on,
    Youíve already replaced me,

    It doesnít seem like what we had was real,
    When youíre so fast at sending me away,

    I realize sheís everything Iím not,
    I realize that I messed us up,

    And Iím sorry for all the times I made you doubt,
    So sorry for the time I made you leave me,
    I know itís my fault,

    But if she can make you happy,
    If she does what I obviously couldnít so well enough,

    Then be happy,
    And know Iíll still love you,

    I guess this is the closure,
    My way of letting go,
    Because I canít change your mind,

    And if she can make you forget,
    Because of my promises I broke,

    Then so be it,
    I hope sheís worth it,

    I hope sheís worth the time that Iím not,
    I guess Iíll eventually move on,
    Maybe Iíll find my heart again,

    Maybe Iíll learn to love again,
    Learn to get over what you call paranoia,

    Maybe Iíll be able to feel again,
    Hopefully be able to give the love inside me again,

    Just know I love our memories,
    Iíll always cherish the time we had together,
    But I donít want you to be the way I seem to make you feel,

    Call me crazy if I never forget,
    You were the one who was there for me,

    And now Iíve lost you as my lover,
    Because forever wasnít very long,

    And I realize I still have to change things,
    I have to find a way to move on,
    Find a way to live without you,

    And when I talk to you,
    Just know I may seem happy,

    But deep in the depths of what used to be me,
    Iím not because I miss you,
    And in the dark Iíll still shed a tear,

    But I realize I canít keep this up,
    I have to find something else to occupy my mind,

    Now that youíre gone,
    I canít forget my regret or fear,

    You made me afraid again,
    This time it might take me a while,
    For me to let someone close again,

    Because whatís the point when I always end up hurt in the end?
    When I always seem to be the one at fault,

    I canít seem to do this right,
    And the pain is always the same,

    When I think Iíve experienced the worst,
    Something happens to make it worse,
    So sorry I messed us up,

    In ending I see I wasnít worth your time,
    I see that Iím wasting my time,
    And everything we had is gone,

    I understand you donít want me,
    Even though I still want you,
    But you just ignore that fact,

    I donít ever want you sad,
    I donít want to see you unhappy,
    So know Iím still standing here loving you,
    But I know Iím never having you,

    Because you seem better off without me,
    I know youíre better off without me,
    But the pain remains the same,

    Iím sorry and goodbye my love.





    Submitted on 2008-12-02 15:23:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Yo.
    commas.

    too many.

    this poem has some amazing potential, sweetheart,

    but you have one giant enormous runon sentence!

    Put some periods in.
    or just leave some ends naked.


    Here I sit looking at the blank page in front of me,
    And yes; this is about you.

    The pain is inside just wanting to come out,
    And the tears find their way down my face.

    But thereís nothing I can do
    When youíve already moved on,
    Youíve already replaced me.

    It doesnít seem like what we had was real,
    When youíre so fast at sending me away.

    I realize sheís everything Iím not,
    I realize that I messed us up,

    And Iím sorry for all the times I made you doubt,
    So sorry for the time I made you leave me,
    I know itís my fault.

    But if she can make you happy,
    If she does what I obviously couldnít so well enough,

    Then be happy,
    And know Iíll still love you.

    and so on.

    just mix it up!

    just a suggestion.
    | Posted on 2008-12-02 00:00:00 | by CourtneyLynne | [ Reply to This ]


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