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    dots Submission Name: I'm Sorrydots
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    Author: nastydevil
    ASL Info:    17/male/sault ste maire
    Elite Ratio:    0.94 - 1/5/13
    Words: 123
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 640
    Average Vote:    1.0000
    Bytes: 762



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    dotsI'm Sorrydots
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    Messing things up with you
    was the worst I could do
    you trusted me
    with the one thing that you cherish
    I pissed that away
    for you to even look at me again
    would be a blessing

    for you to even say my name,
    give me a second chance
    is crazy to ask
    so I sit back and cry
    thinking why I did something so stupid
    saying those words
    I did the one thing
    I was not going to do
    hurting you
    feels like I hurt myself
    as soon as you said the words
    "you really hurt me"
    a knife jabbed into my heart
    tears pouring down my face
    blood rushing down my body
    I utter the words
    "I'm Sorry"




    Submitted on 2008-12-02 17:07:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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