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    dots Submission Name: Das Purporrot Feder fur Kummerdots
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    Author: LRRolins
    ASL Info:    17/A/A world you dont own
    Elite Ratio:    5.37 - 142/140/84
    Words: 200
    Class/Type: Prose/Passion
    Total Views: 942
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1298



    Description:
       Eh,I don't know.
    I just wrote it.
    It's special and it's about my Jesus.YAY! >,< =]

    Anyways,I wrote a big chunk in German.
    I'm HOPING that it says this: Yesterday,I wrote with a dark pen. And today,I write with a purple pen. And today,I only wrote for my Lord and I only cry out for His People.

    SAme with the title. It's supposed to say: The purple pen for heartbreak

    Please tell me if something's not right there, k? Anyways,I don't have any umlauts to put in the words...example - fur.The 'u' is an umlaut.

    Anyways,thoughts??

    Oooh,oohh,oohhh!!I almost forgot! I titled it twice cause I couldn't decide. Name ideas, please??

    <2222

    THE NAME HAS BEEN DECIDED!!


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsDas Purporrot Feder fur Kummerdots
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    "I press on to ward the goal to win the prize for which God has called me" - Phillippians 3:14 (NIV)

    Lord knows that I'm not a cookie-cutter shape
    and that I need a clean slate.
    What I need I cannot discern.
    Forgiveness?
    No,that's what we always need,
    but what esle do I have left to learn,
    to yearn for?

    "Explore,Identify, and Destory the objective correlative.Divy out the dose to cure it."

    That's what the Doctor said.

    "Hide her,sweep her up under the rug"

    That was their solution for me.

    Heartsurgey:They wanted to perform heartsurgery on me.
    Their need to desensitize me is nigh, dire, and high.
    And so is their will to throw me into a blackhole.

    Or am I just paranoid?

    Is there nothing bigger than They?
    Are there only Figures who grant to those who beg and are ye of little Faith or is there something Bigger who grants to those who pray and live on Faith alone?

    Gestern,Ich geschrieben mit eine dunkel feder.Und Huete, Ich schriebe mit eine purporrot feder. Und Huete, Ich einzige schriebe fur meine Gott und Ich einzige Schrei aus fur Ihm Luete.




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