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Author: bkj43
ASL Info:    22/m/va
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Class/Type: Poetry /Depressed
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Piece I wrote a little while back about the wake of a break-up


She still resides within me
Like a splinter in my heart;
A bright smile
That sweetly haunts my memory.

Every inch,
An aching beauty
That mocks and teases me.
And sometimes I wish things were different...

Well the present is the past
And the future is now,
And I stand on one leg
On this uneasy ground.

Will lean me left
And sadness
Will make me right.

Although the sunshine is pleasant,
The gray clouds that rumble
Remind me
Of why I ran inside.

But was it to hide?
Oh questions upon questions,
These uncertainties in life
Two sides to every coin, and every strife.

A kiss of life and death
Was what was given by her lovely breath.
So what am I now,
More or Less?

The color of my feelings I know will change
Like the leaves in the trees
And the moon
That waxes and wanes.

But truth, where is it?
This I want to know.
Where is that rock
That I want to find and go?

Cause such torture it is, to know and not know...

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