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    dots Submission Name: my not so perfect worlddots
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    Author: AngelinDisguise
    ASL Info:    23/F/AUS
    Elite Ratio:    2.23 - 133/171/100
    Words: 135
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsmy not so perfect worlddots
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    watch as the world takes control
    breaks the mind of this little girl
    19 and in control or so it seems
    really this girl is screaming to be free
    a love that once was never known
    seems to be the lock between her and the world
    the perfect life her friends always say
    but there is a side of me you just dont know
    i cry at night i scream in fear
    ive chose my destiny gone past the final exit
    its like a freeway with no off ramps
    my future is 1million k's away
    with so many entries but no escape
    the thoughs of suicide have returned
    it seems like my only way out
    im breaking im done
    say good bye to the girl with the perfect world





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      an emotional rollercoaster detail , mental anguish at times , a shield from the world that needs the energy release , great poem , keep writing
    | Posted on 2009-04-02 00:00:00 | by JoJoCrab | [ Reply to This ]


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