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    dots Submission Name: I look in the mirror, not from behind the maskdots
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    Author: Plegias
    ASL Info:    17/ male/ my house
    Elite Ratio:    3.25 - 37/23/40
    Words: 140
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Misc
    Total Views: 632
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 742



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       BORDOM! and it feels good to say so


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    dotsI look in the mirror, not from behind the maskdots
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    Just who am I?
    Am I who I want to be?
    Do I show it to the world?
    How do I show it if I do (if I don't, why not)?
    I can answer these with ease,
    I am an intelligent human being (as are most that don't uncover potential),
    I feel as though I am who I want to be (and not one who falls before society's feet)
    I try to show myself to the world (and not hide within the conform of the world)
    I show it be being myself and expressing myself everyday and doing in what I believe in (unlike those that act as though they are robots)
    NOW it's your turn. Answer these for yourself and find wether you're looking in a mirror or hiding beneath a mask not your own.




    Submitted on 2008-12-04 03:24:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Thnaks for the comment on I gave the Golden Heart. I have to admit, pretty good i just think you could've made it longer.
    | Posted on 2008-12-15 00:00:00 | by Doublefeather | [ Reply to This ]


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