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    dots Submission Name: Sage Sayings: Ourselves and Our Lifedots
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    Author: Plegias
    ASL Info:    17/ male/ my house
    Elite Ratio:    3.25 - 37/23/40
    Words: 281
    Class/Type: Personal Quotes/Misc
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       No real point, but I thought I'd make a point to others.


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    dotsSage Sayings: Ourselves and Our Lifedots
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    "I don't really know about this..." or "I don't like this right here..."I hear plenty of people say that, and many of which are always occupied with things that don't matter or have little importance. What we, as a people (myself included at times), should do is look away from minor details and look at the picture as a whole; is it a classical painting or modern self-determination? A Baroque iron work or an origami paper crane? We do not even take the time to look at what WE, ourselves, are! How do we do this? Simple really, look around! Your environment (even one you imagine), Your friends, YOUR desicions that YOU make and help make! It all shows who YOU are! When I look around, I see a peaceful room with a couch and a bookshelf and this computer and a radio; I can already tell I'm a person who's laid back and enjoys the simpler life, possibly a better life but full of things that could go wrong and one who is not socially in tact. My friends are all kind-intentioned and good natured; that makes me a kind and generally good person, but as well ignorant. My descisions are towards others, generally, and generally towards the production of others; this dictates I am a caring person but one who forgets that I need help too and that soon others will be too trustwrothy of me. Now it is YOUR turn to think...WHO ARE YOU? are you who everyone thinks you are, a society twisted good-do-er or are you an individual who thinks and functions for themself? YOU must answer this and observe YOUR life to figure out YOU!




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      I am a person who thinks for themselves. Example: I'm wearing a dress today. XX. Long story.


    Anyways. Good thoughts. I like it; it's very true. :)
    | Posted on 2008-12-10 00:00:00 | by SweetAndOhSoME | [ Reply to This ]


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