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    dots Submission Name: Just me thinking a littledots
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    Author: Plegias
    ASL Info:    17/ male/ my house
    Elite Ratio:    3.25 - 37/23/40
    Words: 24
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Misc
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    dotsJust me thinking a littledots
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    Trust yourself! Just because you think differently than society, that doesn't mean that you're wrong; you are just showing yourself for who you are!




    Submitted on 2008-12-06 05:58:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Thanks, but both could be wrong.
    You know what, I'll work on it. Confused stares from others are better than the one in the mirror.
    | Posted on 2008-12-07 00:00:00 | by salviadelusion | [ Reply to This ]


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