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    dots Submission Name: Light Haikudots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 12
    Class/Type: Haiku/Love
    Total Views: 543
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 107



    Description:
       Holiday, Christmas blessings of love,peace,joy,abundance & smiles to share
    For each NOW ~*~


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    dotsLight Haikudots
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    The Blue, Green,
    Purple
    Galaxies of Light
    Shine On
    Technicolor
    Dream ~*~




    Submitted on 2008-12-06 21:05:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      The lights of Christmas always raise my spirits. Merry Christmas to you and yours! :-) Sharon
    | Posted on 2008-12-09 00:00:00 | by Peggy Paris | [ Reply to This ]
      Yeah, I liked this. A nice little haiku. Wish we had more of 'em!
    | Posted on 2008-12-08 00:00:00 | by alexboy | [ Reply to This ]
      The holiday lights! Can't imagine Christmas without them! Merry Christmas to you, lovely lady!
    | Posted on 2008-12-07 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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