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C'est la vie and life carries on

Author: MusingMinstrel
ASL Info:    26/Male/Chicago
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Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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C'est la vie and life carries on

You know, when I think about it:

The Ones that I miss the most,
aren't the Ones who have died.
I'm sure they matter
to somebody
but no, not here
Not tonight.
Time will tell who really
Leaves who behind.

But c'est la vie and life carries on.

The Ones that I miss the most
aren't the Ones who have died.
But rather
The Ones who are still living
And don't hang around here anymore
Those who know
In secret
That the way life is
Isn't the way life could be

But c'est la vie and life carries on.

Submitted on 2008-12-07 05:07:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I really like the way this flowed together, the pauses placed where they were made it close to damn perfect. I want to say it reminds me of a piece in a musical called "Spring Awakening" It's amazing, I assure you. But, there's a song that me and my two brothers preformed in a three part song called "Those you've known." It truly reminded me of that experience, again great piece it brings out what you want us to see.

<3 ~ Lens
| Posted on 2009-02-02 00:00:00 | by Twilight527 | [ Reply to This ]
  ive been spending quite a bit of time thinking about people who used to be everything in my life and yet somehow are hardly anything any more. seasons and growing apart are the generally accepted reasons but ugh... theres such a sting when i think about a couple of people.

i always wonder what they think of the way things turned out.
| Posted on 2008-12-07 00:00:00 | by Someones Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]

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