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    dots Submission Name: only the kings horsesdots
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    Author: Cannablisjunkie
    ASL Info:    22/Male/Indianapolis, IN
    Elite Ratio:    2.59 - 77/147/87
    Words: 120
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    Love of mine.. time in line
    we've invested our all into this..
    Only ourselves, and if parted saddness
    will plague this city we call paradise.

    Eruptures of riots marching around like hounds
    seaching for the king will scream and sing their
    song of hatred for us..

    His guards bound are usless
    against my love and hearts bravery so torn and callused.
    To leave you breathless, then to part the sound
    with words like roars from animals mouths..

    "I love you more than anything,"

    that's the song the angels sing!
    This is how much you mean to me,
    I love you more now than anything,
    this is how much you mean to me!!




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