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    dots Submission Name: stardots
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    Author: wizardmaster
    ASL Info:    2314/girl/China
    Elite Ratio:    4.09 - 7/7/21
    Words: 109
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsstardots
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    My star is shining bright
    On this very night
    Glistening
    Glamoring
    Please hold on tight.
    I praise
    This star's
    Humble beauty,
    In a way
    We are alike,
    A delicate jewel
    Sure to delight.
    But that is not
    Why are we alike,
    Both stars shine
    In the darkest night.





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