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Submission Name: star dots

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Author:	wizardmaster
ASL Info:	2314/girl/China
Elite Ratio:	4.09 - 7/7/21
Words:	109

Class/Type:	Poetry/Misc
Total Views:	819
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	438

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star

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My star is shining bright
On this very night
Glistening
Glamoring
Please hold on tight.
I praise
This star's
Humble beauty,
In a way
We are alike,
A delicate jewel
Sure to delight.
But that is not
Why are we alike,
Both stars shine
In the darkest night.

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

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It means a lot to them, as it does to you.