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    dots Submission Name: True Friendsdots
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    Author: Jerilynn
    ASL Info:    59, woman, U.S.A.
    Elite Ratio:    3.53 - 68/66/20
    Words: 96
    Class/Type: Poetry/Friendship
    Total Views: 652
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    Description:
       In appreciation of what I have.


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    dotsTrue Friendsdots
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    I would live
    my life
    peopled with friends
    that do not desert
    or turn their back
    because of my infirmities

    No need
    for spectacular beauty
    or exceptional wit
    or wisdom.
    just ones like me.

    Ones who live
    in the natural realm
    with resilience
    who face disasters
    unbowed
    and undaunted.

    We seek
    to laugh and share
    with others who know
    the rough paths.

    Ones who know
    how to smile
    and arenít afraid
    of a few tears.

    By Yeohon 11/4/08




    Submitted on 2008-12-08 17:00:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Adversity and hardship invariably create character and wisdom. Nice verse, lovely lady!
    | Posted on 2008-12-08 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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