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    dots Submission Name: Want Youdots

    Author: cwaldron
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    Words: 133
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsWant Youdots

    Don稚 wanna play no games no more
    Don稚 want you coming in and out of my door
    Want you here when the nights are cold
    I値l keep you warm and keep you wantin more
    All I want is some of your affection
    Cause your loving gets my full attention
    You値l never find a love like mine
    Not like these other chicks baby I知 a dime
    Cook your food and I値l wash your clothes
    Got that goody ready when you get home
    I値l rub you down when you come form work
    And fix your bath cause thats what your worth
    This love I知 feelin baby is forever
    Ride or die baby leave you never
    Just say the word cause I want you in my world
    All I知 tryna be is your official girl

    Submitted on 2008-12-08 20:04:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      HOW SWEET! That is so nice! I really don't have anything to correct you with!
    | Posted on 2008-12-10 00:00:00 | by Plegias | [ Reply to This ]

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