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    dots Submission Name: I will Not Conform!!!dots
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    Author: lonely goth
    ASL Info:    17/F/Coucil Idaho
    Elite Ratio:    3.54 - 28/31/35
    Words: 143
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 535
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 978



    Description:
       My parents have become like crazy bible huggers, and they hate that i am not.....so them and all their friends at church try to shove god down my through....my mom told me that the devil has me wrapped around his finger, thats what gave me the iea for this poem...and i was really hi when i wrote it.


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    dotsI will Not Conform!!!dots
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    Im wrapped around his finger
    Thats right mom, Hes the devil
    Holding me in his tight embrace
    Controlling me every thought

    Take another hit
    Chug another drink
    Pop another pill
    Plunge deeper into sin

    Everyone throwing their bibles
    Telling me that im wrong
    Taking away my pride
    Silencing me song

    Sharing their so called "wisdom"
    Shoving God down my throught"
    Wanting me to believe them
    Only anger it has brought

    The Raging soul within me
    Screams with every push
    Breaks with every word
    Runs from every speech

    I will never conform
    To the thing you want me to be
    Perfect little angel girl
    ... (dot dot dot) thats not for me

    I am who i am
    A rebel you could say
    But you know what, what the fuck ever
    He the devil, in me, always stays.




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      Dude that [censored] rocks....I believe in God and [censored] but that [censored] isn't cool for them to do you like that. My aunt turned to God something wicked and I swear she is crazy now. But yeah I hear ya no conforming [censored] that [censored] we are who we are and no one can take it from us....well...except the devil..lol
    -Danna
    | Posted on 2008-12-09 00:00:00 | by captureyourself | [ Reply to This ]


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