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    dots Submission Name: Chapter 1. Movingdots
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    Author: wizardmaster
    ASL Info:    2314/girl/China
    Elite Ratio:    4.09 - 7/7/21
    Words: 253
    Class/Type: Story/Misc
    Total Views: 755
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1293



    Description:
       first chapter in my new book.


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    dotsChapter 1. Movingdots
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    Even though this is my choice, I still wonder if it's a good one. I mean, it's not like he's that bad, but I've only seen him in a total of 4 summers.
    "Dear are you sure you want to move with Leo? I mean, he is old and will be needing a lot of help around the house. Not to mention about that the whether is unpredictable. "
    "Don't worry mom, I'm sure I want to move with Grandpa.I mean I've always wanted to go to Ireland, and I am part Irish."
    I currently live in Denver, Colorado. Or at least for a couple more minutes. Then I go to Ireland to live with grandpa.
    " Well, If your sure."
    The thing is, I wasn't sure. But I figured that I needed more time with him in my life.
    " yes mom, I'm sure."
    The screeching of the loud speaker came on and a women's voice pronounced:"Last call for flight 43, straight to Ireland."
    " guess, I'd gotta go. Bye Mom!"
    " Bye Honey!"
    As I ran to the plane before the gates closed, I looked back, and there she was, crying. I waved one more time before I was off to the plane.
    Next stop, Ireland. I thought to my self.




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    ||| Comments |||
      You'd want to change 4 in the first sentence to "four", I think. And "guess I'd gotta go" to "guess I've gotta go" or "guess I gotta go" or whatever. Because I think guess I'd gotta go would translate to guess I would gotta go. So, yeah. :D UMMMM... hmm. It's okay, I guess. I mean, there isn't really much here. so uhmm... Yeah, well, anyway, I have NO idea what I'm talking about.

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    | Posted on 2008-12-11 00:00:00 | by Lacrimosa | [ Reply to This ]


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