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    dots Submission Name: The Bad Cropdots
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    Author: The Gadfly
    ASL Info:    52/M/Moreno Valley, CA
    Elite Ratio:    3.55 - 1048/1348/375
    Words: 31
    Class/Type: Poetry/Satire
    Total Views: 674
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 210



    Description:
       A witty ditty from the racing committee.


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    dotsThe Bad Cropdots
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    You snipe and scoff with every breath,
    In hopes some see your side in it.
    Won't beatin' that ol' horse to death,
    Just make it harder ridin' it?

    The Gadfly




    Submitted on 2008-12-09 10:28:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      As we say down here, some people just gotta keep beatin that dead horseand try to ride it some more.

    I loved the pun in your title. Very cute!

    jan
    | Posted on 2008-12-10 00:00:00 | by jaycee | [ Reply to This ]
      Yeah, liked this. Flowed well, gets your point across. A witty ditty indeed. A succint review for a succint rhyme.
    | Posted on 2008-12-09 00:00:00 | by alexboy | [ Reply to This ]


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