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    dots Submission Name: Unifying Theories of Chemistry dots
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    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 279
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       part one of a trilogy

    A BIG HELLO to all of you who have been so gracious to comment on my work and many many thanks for doing so ..... and to all those who have taken the time to read the poems I have posted, my thanks also. Time at the moment does not give me much time to reply to comments, but I will.... be seeing you lots of love to you all Col13x


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    Unifying Theories of Chemistry

    Plants react in synthesis
    Stimulations sunlight
    Breathing the winds causes
    Through fluid chains
    Reproducing flowering responses

    And systematically chemistries
    Drive in attractions of curiosity
    Stranger love crushes
    To your ignition sexual A-symmetry
    Produces adrenaline's certain heat
    And senses blood pounding

    So photosynthetic initiates
    The A.T.P. of chemical currency
    Splits living links furthering
    More simple to more complex
    Colour element changing
    Leaf green to red Anthocyanin

    As well as a suntan
    Skins concourse in molecules
    Precipitates and reverberates
    The bonded genome of D.N.A.
    Creating myriad form
    Tangent on thoughts
    Even dreams
    Evolve chemical reactions

    While sun by sea explodes
    Atomically
    The light amino manifestation
    Walks among trees
    Respiring in cycles
    Of exchanging formulations
    Alchemy of oxygen’s infusing

    And well with emotion
    Binds its stanza’s of interpretation
    Given word then
    Another descriptions connection
    To connection
    Connected
    By a star lights birth

    Indivisible this “All” travels
    Forth and back to a
    Higher or lower osmotic pressure
    And back and forth
    Between lovers
    As waves drawn to beaches
    By the gentle pull
    Of sands moon distracted
    Infatuated affair
    With the Earth

    This chemistry of love
    The chemical of life
    Patterns intricate mazes
    In a micro-cosmos
    Of eternal meaning
    And a baby
    Is born

    While the boundless eternity
    Moves and collects
    Responsive concurring
    Dust mote intercepts
    From wide eyes stares
    Which interpret
    A scene
    Of its own manifest beauty

    Even in tears of sadness
    The Ceretonine balances
    To intercede with memories
    Moments of happiness
    The infinite qualification
    Of chemical reaction
    Clues us in
    Yet again
    To this fundamental

    Unity









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