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    dots Submission Name: i hate itdots
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    Author: sota
    ASL Info:    17/m/fl
    Elite Ratio:    1.96 - 2/2/4
    Words: 94
    Class/Type: Story/Serious
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    dotsi hate itdots
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    i hate it when the rong guy comes up to a magnificent,smart,independent women and toys with her emotions.

    i hate when a women of such calibur ends up being one of the satistics in the book,all cus of somone else.

    im a black man. and when i see a women who i know can do better then she is doing be draged down by a friend who is doing all the rong things.

    what happend to all the good blach women,where did they go? what did i do?






    Submitted on 2008-12-09 18:36:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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