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    dots Submission Name: criticismdots

    ASL Info:    22/m/ P.C. FL
    Elite Ratio:    3.89 - 26/26/16
    Words: 275
    Class/Type: Rant/Serious
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    what good does criticism do?
    it serves little purpose to those whom are truely happy with their accomplishments!
    It serves all too much purpose to those seeking to tear down others for their own satisfaction! One should always be secure enough in their own abilities not to tear other's apart for gain. Just telling someone that they should re-write some thing because they don't like it offers no CONSTUCTIVE thought, just the thought that everything they read is written for them/ to please them!
    This is NEVER THE CASE. "Someone" (rue) told me that which i have heard time and time again, Every so-called poet has been critiqued to tears during their life then hearald as a timeless poet or writer after their death(para-phrased of course)
    However I write for the enjoyment of the flowing thought, the release of random idea, the freedom of self, and the benefit of MY LOVE, so she can peer into the inner-workings of the on she loves that seems to have trouble speaking his thought in her presence(for she takes my breath away and strikes me speachless most of the time)
    At any rate I will quit rambling on& on & ON& ON & ON>>> oh, i did it again?
    OK IF any one has anything bad to say about my writting, KEEP IT TO YOURSELF!
    IF anyone has anything good to say about my writting, KEEP IT TO YOURSELF!
    (this of course does not apply to you CAROSEL<~~~~
    this does not apply to you RUEJACOBS<~~~~


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      You love our oppinions,dont lie,you wouldnt be here otherwise

    | Posted on 2008-12-13 00:00:00 | by Raphael | [ Reply to This ]
      Of Course, my love.
    | Posted on 2008-12-10 00:00:00 | by dismal_s child | [ Reply to This ]
      That's your right, to deny critique. It's perfectly understandable, if you simply want to write for yourself.

    However: it would perhaps be easier for people to recognize your disapproval if you made a note on top of your pieces stating that you have no desire for critique or praise, as many people will not happen to read this post. A warning would prevent a great deal of bad feelings on both sides.
    | Posted on 2008-12-10 00:00:00 | by saartha | [ Reply to This ]
      well said.
    nicely worded.

    i love the nickname you gave to her.

    she is not unlike a Wheel of Fate...she's my Perfect Carosel.
    | Posted on 2008-12-10 00:00:00 | by ruejacobs | [ Reply to This ]

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