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    dots Submission Name: To youdots
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    Author: nastydevil
    ASL Info:    17/male/sault ste maire
    Elite Ratio:    0.94 - 1/5/13
    Words: 173
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 111
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 1009



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    dotsTo youdots
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    I walk around like nothing has happend,
    But in reality something has.
    I want you to just say yes
    everytime the same answer is no
    People tell me we would look good together,
    We should just try it out;
    It would be the best thing to happen to me

    I see you walk pass me
    wish I was by your side
    Holding hands with you
    Laughing, having a great time.
    Instead I'm walking behind you
    trying to get to your pace.
    Just want to see myself in your eyes
    But you keep running
    why do you avoid me so?
    This question I ask
    Still cant find the answer.
    I will wait for you little do you know
    care for you way to much
    to just pack and leave
    when ever you are down
    I'm here to bring you up
    thats how much I care about you
    Nothing ever can change that
    So do you see me as just a guy?
    or do you see me a brand new sparke in your eye?




    Submitted on 2008-12-10 02:37:59     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I love your poem It is extremely deep. I feel this way about a girl I my school and I just can't stop thinking about her. I think you may want to even try expressing yourself more in a way by trusting sdome more of your heart to her. I love the wording it would touch the heart of any woman. I love the way you write your poetry and I feel you have exellent potential and I am antissipating your magnum opus.
    | Posted on 2008-12-10 00:00:00 | by Sepheroth432 | [ Reply to This ]



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