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    dots Submission Name: Open Mindsdots
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    Author: Jerilynn
    ASL Info:    59, woman, U.S.A.
    Elite Ratio:    3.53 - 68/66/20
    Words: 124
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 630
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       just a thought I had


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    dotsOpen Mindsdots
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    I wonder at the passion
    flowing from pens instead of lives.
    Novocaine love cannot be felt
    only a prickle
    in the place it should be

    yet hatred and misunderstanding
    sweep like an avalanche
    destroyers
    suffocating truth
    the views of others only valid
    if in agreement

    why not
    bury dissension in the pit
    realizing that differences
    are to be embraced

    why fear the very thing
    that makes life
    an adventure
    seek others views
    like prizes that open our eyes
    to different possibilities

    change is good
    we were not meant
    to be made of marble
    frozen to the center of our being
    with granite hearts.




    Submitted on 2008-12-10 05:40:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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