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    dots Submission Name: Unifying Theories of Lightdots

    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 192
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsUnifying Theories of Lightdots

    Unifying Theories of Light

    A waveform particle
    Photon phantoms of packets
    Oceanic cosmos dusts the material
    Separates its contact
    By the touch
    Of the physical

    Human sight by synaptic
    Records sunrisen hue
    And tints painted brush strokes
    Each brilliant parcel
    Carries its message
    Of choreographed stars

    The gossamer veils of mirrors
    Feeding the living
    Traverses faster and faster
    Blinks awakenings

    And associated by love
    Transforms appreciations moment
    To glory
    Flaming banters to star burst
    Of darkness
    In Universal centres

    Edges defined by glittering
    The swirls and eddies
    Of straight line caught rainbows
    All washes through the seen
    The constant
    Torch light of awareness
    In a never ending moment
    Of proclamation

    This finite and infinite sea
    Forms open Albedo
    Defining its cache
    In every individuality
    Of every thought
    And every conceptions colour

    Blade of grass
    Petal rain fall
    Impenetrable diamond
    Refracted forests
    Of dancing shadows
    Of solar passions
    The closest tactile
    Of life



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