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    dots Submission Name: turned arounddots
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    Author: scardnscared
    ASL Info:    20
    Elite Ratio:    2.87 - 339/412/258
    Words: 146
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 86
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    I turned around one day
    found you slowly trailing me
    what was I to say
    you were the one that walked away
    what was I to do
    but ask you
    What can I do for you?
    You looked away
    but I caught the sadness in your eyes
    I thought to myself
    oh my look at what is changing
    I smiled and went to leave
    you touched my arm
    you touched my soul
    just like before
    that was all it took.
    I shook off the feeling
    and started to speak
    but you, with your frozen looks
    stopped me
    you softly said
    "please forgive me, I am the wrong one."
    I sighed and realized that it was never really over
    that I just wished it was
    now I turn to you in my dreams
    and more in my sleep
    cause you comfort me
    if only for a while.




    Submitted on 2008-12-10 17:47:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      hey and hi
    i liked this i think the ending did it

    you worded it quite well

    nice send off

    sandman
    | Posted on 2008-12-11 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]


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