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The Incredible Journey of Words


Author: 7makaveli
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Words: 161
Class/Type: Poetry /Passion
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Sometimes we get too caught up with big words, when everything can be said with so little. That is what I love about words...


The Incredible Journey of Words



From the heart to the mind
From the mind to the hand
From the hand to the pen
From the pen to the paper

From the paper to the eyes
From the eyes to the mind
From the mind to the heart
From the heart to the mouth
From the mouth to the ears
From the ears to the mind

From the mind to the heart
From the heart to the feet
From the feet to the path
From the path to the air
From the air to the skies
From the skies to the sun

From the sun to the clouds
From the clouds to the birds
From the birds to trees
From the trees to the grass
From the grass to the feet
From the feet to the heart
From the heart to the mind

From the mind to the heart
From the heart to the ground
From underground to the soul
Beyond up above




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