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Author: MysterydarkPoet
ASL Info:    20/f/Aust
Elite Ratio:    3.13 - 157 /295 /173
Words: 92
Class/Type: Poetry /Serious
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i've subscribed to a life of lies.
of false eyes and pretend.
i'm trying my hardest.
and things are falling faster.
i thought tying the knot tighter
would make us closer.
so invincible. unbreakable-

but the milk spills at dinner.
and i have nothing left to say.
this world we've built around us
is crumbling and fading to dust
and you continue to drift away.

there's a lipstick smudge on ur shirt.
the smell of taintedness on you skin.
i thought things where different.
but this is where reality begins.

Submitted on 2008-12-11 11:57:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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