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    dots Submission Name: Funnydots
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    Author: NixLacus
    Elite Ratio:    2.45 - 5/11/24
    Words: 30
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotsFunnydots
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    Funny how life may change,
    Funny how moments pass,
    So fast.
    Funny how smiles can fade,
    How tears can be made,
    Too fast.
    But they last.
    Last long.
    Too long.




    Submitted on 2008-12-11 12:50:23     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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