Can't You See What You Mean To Me? -------------------------------------------
Canít you see what you mean to me?
Canít you tell that youíre all I need?
I just want to let you know
That my love it grows
Keeps on growing just for you
And I donít know what to do
I feel so trapped inside
And all I want is for you to make me feel alive
Youíre going to drive me crazy
I donít care if youíre getting lazy
But I need to know now
How you plan making this
So stop taking the piss
This is my life
And I need to know if really want me as your wife
If this love is real
Let me feel
Feel it deep within
Within this broken heart of mine
It's a nice poem. Kind of a nice way of calling out to someone, wanting them to know what you feel for them. The guy that was being called out to in the poem would be very lucky for someone wanting to be his wife and showing her true feeling. It's a bit short though, no offense, but you may have showed more about how the girl was showing her love for him and it's a long lasting one, even if not forever, but a long lasting one. It may be interpreted as a cry from an emo girl but it depends on people and at least you didn't express much on what would happen if the girl was rejected. Overall, it's a nice short read.