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    dots Submission Name: Have to Say Good-byedots
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    Author: NixLacus
    Elite Ratio:    2.45 - 5/11/24
    Words: 195
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsHave to Say Good-byedots
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    I met you
    Cared for you
    Fell you
    Still love

    I have to tell you
    Tell you this one last thing
    Something hard for me to say
    I canít be with you
    Canít take this no more

    The past seemed a dream
    Was a perfect time
    Made the feelings so strong
    But as the feelings grow
    My heart wants more

    I feel like you donít feel the same
    Like you donít care as much
    My eyes seem to be opening wider
    Opening to your feelings
    You seem so far

    It makes so sad to say this
    It brings tears to my eyes
    But to be with you
    Everyday to have the feeling that you donít care
    Everyday have you ignore the real me
    It makes me even sadder
    Brings more tears to my eyes

    If I end it now Iíll have few daysí tears
    If I wait Iíll have more
    I donít know if I can take it
    I donít know if my heart will make it

    We have to part
    Have to say our good-byes
    One final time
    Before it hurts too much
    Before it kills me more




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