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    dots Submission Name: Far From Normaldots
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    Author: NixLacus
    Elite Ratio:    2.45 - 5/11/24
    Words: 65
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    dotsFar From Normaldots
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    A normal day
    In this normal life
    A normal message
    On a normal computer
    Brought about an ad-normal change

    You are so far from normal
    So far the same
    You are different from rest
    You make me smile
    Make laugh
    Keep me from crying

    Making the days worth living
    Nights worth sleeping
    Just see you
    See you in my dreams
    One more time




    Submitted on 2008-12-11 12:55:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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