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    dots Submission Name: Care, Need & Lovedots
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    Author: NixLacus
    Elite Ratio:    2.45 - 5/11/24
    Words: 102
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsCare, Need & Lovedots
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    Tell me that you care
    It might just save my life
    Tell me that you care
    It will mean the world to me
    Tell me that you care
    And please mean it forever

    Say that you need me
    It is all I have left
    Say that you need me
    I need to know you do
    Say that you need me
    Because i need you

    Show me you love me
    It will bring a smile to my face
    Show me you love me
    Make this day a good one
    Show me you love
    I need to know this love is real




    Submitted on 2008-12-11 12:56:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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