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    dots Submission Name: I Want...dots

    Author: NixLacus
    Elite Ratio:    2.45 - 5/11/24
    Words: 127
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    dotsI Want...dots

    I want a guy that's all of these
    A guy who's sweet, romantic but still a tease
    A guy that's cute but with a sexy side
    Someone who cares how i feel inside
    A guy that's love is so real
    A guy that helps me feel
    Feel the happiness deep within

    Someone who can make me smile
    Who i can love for a long while
    A guy that knows that i am there
    A guy that treats me fair
    He'll love to hug
    And never bug
    Always be there when i need him

    We will have our fights
    Those little bites
    But we'll make it up together
    We will always be there forever
    He'll never hit
    Not one bit
    And we love our time together

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