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    dots Submission Name: I Trieddots
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    Author: NixLacus
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    I tried to write you a sonnet,
    But I realised I couldn't say this in so little words.
    I tried to write you a song,
    But I realised I ain't the best singer.
    I tried to write you a letter,
    But we've never been that formal.
    I tried to write you a poem,
    But the is my best attempt.
    I tried to tell you the feelings I feel,
    But I've never been so good at talking.
    I tried to say I love you,
    But so few words can't sum up these feelings.
    I tried to think of more words to join it,
    But they all seem to be so small compared to us.




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